Peer reviews of initial draft

For my movie opener, I received feedback from Group 1 and Group 2 about the technical features. Group 1 explained that the sound quality of the microphone should be improved, the lighting should be more dim, and the shot duration needs to be longer. Group 2 also said the shots seemed rushed, the sound quality needs improvement, the lighting should be more dim, and the camera movement was too erratic. To improve the sound quality, I will make the audio clearer and remove background noise while filming or editing. To improve the lighting, I will use low-key lighting to create a darker scene and a stronger mood. I will also increase the length of the shots to improve the pacing and help the audience follow the action more easily. To reduce the erratic camera movement, I will keep the camera steady and plan smoother shots. 

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